Update: July 29th.: Well, after some time without posting anything, I Will post now some pages and editions:

- Corrections on the pages 16, 17, 20, 25, 26 and 29. Because I forgot the things that Viky uses in her left arm. Already fixed. As I forget that a lot, I shall remove them in Chapter 2.

- Corrections on Page 10 removing the thing in front of the cathedral. It gets more clean and I preferred that way.

- Corrections on Page 30. Changed the text for something that fits a bit better and makes a good connection to Page 31 (which Will be posted too).

- Adding pages 31, 32, 33, 34, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 40, 41, 42, 43, 44, 45 and 46. Wow... now I see that I worked a lot in these last days...

- New chapter soon... But I don't know when exactly. Maybe on page 60...70.

-Some new tests with photoshop. I kinda liked

* Remind myself to remove the things at her left arm and make more use of the photoshop in bgs. Also making a model of page, so all pages Will look similar in chapter 2, making it look less amateur.

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Update: July 3rd.: After telling my friends from college what they thought about the story of Sacrificium-V, they made some nice critics which will change 1 or 2 facts of the story until now.
The guy at the beginning will have lost not his legs, but his eyes. The reason for that is simply that my friends told me it looked too much like FMA, and i hadn't realize that. So, because of that, a simply change of the word "legs" for the word "eyes" and then no problems with stealing ideas.
The 2 reasons why I post Sacrificium-V in here is because if it gets deleted from my pc, I have this sorce and also because of the feedback and also for feedback (and maybe, entertaining readers but I guess it is not good enough so I can't assume anyone like it). So changing things in the story is not a bad thing from my point of view. It is just a practice and just for fun, so everytime I see something needs to be changed, I will just do so, in order to try to improve and evade copying.
This week some pages shall be upladed. about 3 or 4 and page 6 will be corrected and re-posted.
That's it for now.
Thanks for everybody that keeps checking Sacrificium-V. : /

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Update: June 25th.: Thanks to everybody that has been watching me and special thanks to all critics. They really help a LOT!!!
Pages 15 until the last one will be erased due to a mistake I have made in page 15. There will be added pages, some panel changes and pages after the 19 will also be uploaded this week.
Feel free to say here what you think about the story so far. Your opinion has a great influence.
What I plan to do further: Keep uploading pages and fixing the mistakes. Introduce some more characters and the main story. Chapter 2 will be started at page 51, just as a new cover shall be made.
I already have a good part of the story ready, in my mind, just as the characters.
Keep watching and never forget:

"For every sacrifice you make, a reward you shall take".



ABOUT THE MANGA:

Sacrificium-V is a manga written and illustrated by Jean Luiz M. Nascimento, myself. All the story and characters are trademarked to me.

It carries a dark but sometimes funny look, dealing with themes like sacrifice, death, comedy, love and everything else I may think about.
It's main objective is helping me to practice a bit and allow me to focus on a single project, just as having fun too, of course.

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Best wishes,
Jean.